Subject: Presenting some badfics.
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Posted on: 2015-09-22 19:53:00 UTC
I hope it doesn't matter if I'm posting some of the badfics I found here, right ?
I already pointed some badfics here, so here I come with three new monsters to take down. I'm warning you against Dresden Files spoilers here, up to Skin Game. If you think these fics aren't so bad, don't hesitate and say it. I want to be sure I can spot badfic.
So, let's begin :
- The Memories Left in the Fog, a Persona 4 fic with an amnesic FeMC who live in Dojima Residence, a "very special guest" according to Igor, with a unstable Velvet Room (cannon is defending itself, I'm sure of it), really urple passages, and a protagonist using Fool Izanami, but not the Wild Card. Sweet Philemon.
- Hell's Bells Potter, a "master of death", post DH Harry get transported to the Dresdenverse while he's searching Merlin's cloak in Burkina Faso. In the Chicago Museum. During Dead Beat. His first action is stealing Butters' moment of awesome against Cassius, the one foreshadowing his role as a Knight of the Cross, and his role as Sue's drummer. It. Cannot. Be. Right.
- ReVamp. This is the main course. I'll be honest, I only began the first chapter, did some scrolling before posting it, but it was necessary. The three chapters are actually three rewritings of the Dresden Files with a WCV!Harry.
First problem, it begins with Blood Rites, leaving the first books rotting in some sort of beige transition. No consequences for this thing's nature, it's still in the White Council, and he passed through Summer Knight alive, altough Elaine was his first kill (the only thing I found logic here, since they were... close during their apprenticeship), and other shenanigans like this.
The other chapters are about Dead Beat and Proven Guilty.
Second problem, the author continues the canon slaughtering by revealing McCoy as Not!Harry's grandfather, who let him walk around with Bob, AND it introduce Maggie in the first Maggie. Harry's daughter, six books before Changes.
This vampire need to die now, and I recommend dropping this Stu in the Deeps, during White Night, so the uber-ghouls take care of him.
The author got others stories, and I'm betting my left arm that some of them will be missionable too, judging by this one.