Subject: Awesome!
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Posted on: 2015-09-17 20:32:00 UTC

Those articles are perfect. Thank you!

I haven't found a name yet, so I'll just call him "the King." It actually won't be too hard for me to find names; I'm taking a page out of C.S. Lewis's book and borrowing from Turkish ("aslan" is the Turkish word for lion). The name of my currently-vague world is "Arev," which is just the word for "flame," and consists of six regions numbered one through six, again, in Turkish. The adventurers start out in the first region, Tek, which is devoted to agriculture. And they have the misfortune of being in the most agriculturally agriculturest town in Tek-- Barlan.

The King makes more sense if I explain how his kingdom works as well, so I hope you don't mind a bit of exposition...

Basically, the six regions are arranged in a circle around the central kingdom, which I don't have a name for yet. The regions are strictly regimented by class and status; Tek is the lowest, consisting mostly of farmers, and is the butt of all jokes in the kingdom. Barlan is the butt of all jokes in Tek, so the PCs are off to a brilliant start. Everything in Arev is tied to your standing-- a combination of wealth, prestige, bravery, and all other aspects of notability. If you want to move into the next region, you have to get a certain level of standing (XP) and get a writ of permission from that region's noble. You can only move up clockwise in this fashion, and only members of the sixth region, Altı (which I'll probably change to something more phonetic; it's pronounced "Alt-uh," with an emphasis on the "a" and a slightly long "l" sound) can go to the central city.

Now, the King. He's an illegitimate son of the last king, and his mother was from Barlan. It's been constantly hung over his head his whole life that he's from lowly Tek, and, worse yet, from Barlan. He utterly loathes the region, and wants to sweep it off of the map, so his main emotions are Shame and Resentment. The Fire King character has largely influenced his plan; he wants to turn all of the other regions against Tek, and eventually provoke outright war. He's already started sowing seeds of strife, mainly amongst the higher nobles in the central city.

I'd like some advice on how to present him. I want him to evoke some measure of pity, but also fear, since he's completely willing to kill thousands of people just to get rid of this shame. I'm not exactly a six foot something muscular dude with a deep voice; how should I roleplay this guy to make him seem threatening, without it coming off as silly?

Thank you so much for the advice! It's already helping me flesh out my world.

-Alleb

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