Subject: I will only answer regarding the last sentence first.
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Posted on: 2017-07-16 15:09:00 UTC
Because I seem to fail to deliver my wish. Here goes.
Later on, I want to write about a friend of one of the protagonist. He raided a caravan, and the protagonist comes to help the attacked caravan. The friend was caught and he cries before the protagonist. I still want them both to work together, which is why I am thinking about a proper to make an immortal to atone for his banditry.
Regarding criticising immortality, what I want to point out is simply that getting hurt hurts, even if you are immortal. Take Ajin for example. I want to see if the pain of death inhibits people by how much if they don't die because of it. Or in my fic, their body reattach themselves perfectly a few hours after they die.