Subject: Nitpicks.
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Posted on: 2016-12-04 18:56:00 UTC
At the sound of muffled speech coming from the Skarmory prompted Ripper to release his beak.
This looks like you ended the sentence in a way that doesn’t match the "At" you started wirh.
The hapless Deinonychus stared after the open door ...
I’m not sure about that, but I would have said "at the open door".
If there are any gods you humans believe in, please let me fossilized again
Missing word "be"?
HG
Starring two angry birds, a crackfic, some very poor life choices, and way too much Suebuprofen.
I know this thing is a lot shorter than what I usually produce, but with the new house rules largely preventing me from any major PPC writing until further notice, I might as well drop it off here while I still can. That and, well... This fic pretty much speaks for itself, really. ^^;
Anyway, enjoy - and welcome back, you stupid tin turkey! XD
>COMMENCING OPERATION: [REDACTED] IN T-MINUS NINE MISSIONS_
At the sound of muffled speech coming from the Skarmory prompted Ripper to release his beak.
This looks like you ended the sentence in a way that doesn’t match the "At" you started wirh.
The hapless Deinonychus stared after the open door ...
I’m not sure about that, but I would have said "at the open door".
If there are any gods you humans believe in, please let me fossilized again
Missing word "be"?
HG
Ah the needs of the agency to send people into canons that they don't actually like.
Poor birdy should have been shoved into the shower before going to medical.
I always found this anime... well, dumb, but that's just barbaric. My sympathy also go for Falchion here.
We'll see how it goes for him later.
...with a big "To Be Continued" sign. Because what happens to the poor bird after this is a whole other story in its own right. (And also a co-write with Voyd, but again, the new house rules mean it probably won't be completed for a good, long while. :C)
Though calling Dora an "anime"... Wow. Just... wow. *facewings*
Be it western or eastern, it's still anime at the end of the day.
But, seeing as how a good chunk of the internet believes that Anime IS NOT ANIMATION AND IS A GIFT FROM HEAVEN ABOVE, I'd rather not dwell on this topic for too long