Nitpicks. by
Hieronymus Graubart
on 2016-12-04 18:56:00 UTC
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At the sound of muffled speech coming from the Skarmory prompted Ripper to release his beak.
This looks like you ended the sentence in a way that doesn’t match the "At" you started wirh.
The hapless Deinonychus stared after the open door ...
I’m not sure about that, but I would have said "at the open door".
If there are any gods you humans believe in, please let me fossilized again
Missing word "be"?
HG
Re: And a new mission from me as well! by
Bram
on 2016-11-30 18:17:00 UTC
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Ah the needs of the agency to send people into canons that they don't actually like.
Poor birdy should have been shoved into the shower before going to medical.
Yeah, it speaks for itself. by
Hardric
on 2016-11-30 16:35:00 UTC
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I always found this anime... well, dumb, but that's just barbaric. My sympathy also go for Falchion here.
We'll see how it goes for him later.