Subject: New Mission!
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Posted on: 2016-08-09 02:53:00 UTC
In which Za'kiir and Natalie exterminate a planet.
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New Mission! by
on 2016-08-09 02:53:00 UTC
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Read it, liked it, nothing to complain about. (nm) by
on 2016-08-19 18:40:00 UTC
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Re: New Mission! by
on 2016-08-11 15:32:00 UTC
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Whose idea was it to play I-spy in the RC? The intro was cute, and I liked the mini in the summary appearing.
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Initial thoughts by
on 2016-08-09 04:28:00 UTC
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I liked this.
The bit with Timelord showing up in the RC and getting coaxed through the portal with promises of time paradoxes was pretty darn funny.
I also really liked the lines about the pin drop and Death's grip.
Za'kiir has a point. "I spy" is not very challenging in an RC.
However, you said that Natalie and Za'kiir would be exterminating a planet. There was a distinct lack of planets blowing up in this mission. I've been lied to!!!1111
More seriously, where did the Stu's body end up? I figure it's probably worth defining that more specifically than "portal to somewhere".