So I’ll not even try to conjure a proper review; I’m just going to berate you after saying that I actually liked this interlude.

Solvig sighed and momentarily lifted her gaze. When her gaze met with Nurse Chan’s gaze ...
Three gazes in one line, and a fourth in the next paragraph, are a bit much. Maybe you could try to find some other words?

The fact that nearly killed Sarah in that mission...
Missing word "I"?

"Solvig, please stop," the Nurse said suddenly, stopping Solvig’s rant.
I’m not quite sure why this took me out of the story so that I had to take a note. It’s either because Nurse Chan had something "said suddenly" just on the previous page, or it’s the stopping "stop". I guess "interrupted" might work better hear.

"Solvig, I did tell you it was a different universe to those you know, did not I?"
Shouldn’t this be "did I not"? Or perhaps "didn’t I" (messing with the grammar to be able to use a contraction, which Corinna Chan apparently does not do)? Or is this Corinna Chan not knowing English grammar?

... it ended in an stalemate…
Since this isn’t a quote from an old fic, it should be "a stalemate".

Although I do question the validity of such occurrence ...
Shouldn’t this be "such an occurrence"?

I did not knew until later that I had caught a Riolu ...
Should be "I did not know ...".

Nubis and I were just taking a stroll the shore of the lake ...
Shouldn’t this be "on the shore"?

I took a dry branch that found lying there and tackled the one who was directly attacking Nubis ...
Another "I" is missing there (should be "that I found").

When I came back to my senses and realized I had done ...
Should be "realized what I had done".

The rest of the group was stunned to what they have seen ...
Should be "what they had seen" (past perfect).

"No. And would not be the last one... "
Missing word? (Should be "And it would".) Although I wouldn’t have noticed this if there weren’t so many other words missing. I could actually imagine that Nurse Chan left this one out.

She then stopped laughing as suddenly as she started ...
Should be "as suddenly as she had started" (past perfect).

... and a good amount of soldiers from sides deserted ...
Should be "from both sides".

... artifacts for the summoning the Legendary Ho-Oh.
If "summoning" is used as a noun here, it should be "for the summoning of the Legendary Ho-Oh". On the other hand, if "summoning" is used as a verb. it doesn’t get an article; it should just be "for summoning the Legendary Ho-Oh".

Her followers did not had the same restriction however, making the break in more difficult than it should have, the good thing ...
Should be "did not have the same" and "than it should have been".

I had broken into one their hideouts ...
Should be "one of their hideouts".

... where met the Elder Sage and left the artifacts under his care.
Should be "where I met".

I felt like head was going to explode under all of that ...
Should be "like my head".

... who was glaring me with scorn in its gaze ...
Should be "glaring at me".

"Oh, do not they? " Nurse Chan said with a smirk.
The same word order problem as above; I think that should be "Oh, do they not?"

Solvig had a giggle fit after that, and as soon she was able to control herself...
Shouldn’t this be "... as soon as she was ..."?

HG

That's pretty gooooood.
You did that whole connecting thing pretty well (though, to be fair, it's rather easy with PPC stuff)

Bit of spooky phrasing with 'Undoubtedly she had touched a chord, that never should had.'
Y'know. Might work better with 'have,' or 'shouldn't had.'

Also, 'Holey moley, that means you're a ninja!' is sort of adorable. Haven't heard 'holey moley' in years.

And, er, the implication that no-one is going to miss a dead hunter, or that no-one should miss a dead hunter because he was sexist seems a little bit twisted to me. If someone's been killed, they've been killed, even if they've been a wanker, y'know?
And people oughtn't be killed, the way I see it.
Anyway, I'm sure his mother, or his dog, at least, misses him.

Status Quo is shaken! I know more!
The link has been clicked!

I know that's not a badfic, but sweet Philemon, that's a really nasty 'verse there. I feel really bad for people having to live through that. Kudos for the character devlopment though. My wishes go for Nurse Chan.

Now I'm relly impatient to see whatever you've got in mind for thee future. It promises a lot from the look on things right now.

I liked this, even though (as far as I can remember) I haven't read anything with these folks in it before.

Most of the part where Solvig picked her name was pretty funny. Especially the embarrassing middle name section. ("Most" because the last name change reads as serious, as intended(?))

In general, the serious, character-developing bits (which were most of the interlude) were well-done and not too serious.

My only comment it that it took a moment to realize that Nurse Chan's story wasn't a badfic of some sort, since the format matched PPC house style for missions (bold the quoted bits of bad stuff).