Subject: Re: What's this? Agents getting vacation?
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Posted on: 2016-07-18 15:50:00 UTC
I like how you lightened up on the angst.
It seems a little like the question of abortion or adoption with the debugger, but not so horrific to contemplate because she's not bonded to the fetus yet.
Apparently so. It's about time the Aviator and Zeb got a break.
Just a little slice of life involving good food, good company, and not getting killed by the Horde. Pretty good for a vacation, ne?
Enjoy.
(Just for an idea of where they're going, have a picture that turned out way bigger than I expected.)
Androia never got further than from Teldrassil to Moonglade and Darkshore (pre-Cataclysm).
The typo S.M.F. noticed is here:
Below them stretched the Jade Forest, green treetops and pink cherry blossoms as far as they eye could see.
You don’t get a proper review because I couldn’t say anything that was not already said better, and since I couldn’t find two points of criticism I can’t take Poor Cynic’s expanded challenge anyway.
HG
Seeing what happened to the world post-Cata might be a bit of a shock, just a heads up. Some zones got a serious revamp.
Thanks again, and the typo is now fixed.
I like how you lightened up on the angst.
It seems a little like the question of abortion or adoption with the debugger, but not so horrific to contemplate because she's not bonded to the fetus yet.
Yes! Yes! Love it, love it, love it. This is perfect, and finally these two catch a break. Only one question: Does Zeb know what Ave knows about his existence? I can't believe that just now came to me.
He's got an idea of what happened, but he's never really asked. Partly because he doesn't want to know, partly because he's afraid to.
I can tell you know and love this game as much as the Aviator does. ^^ The descriptions of both Azeroth and Mt. Coronet were stunning.
I think I caught one instance of a "they" instead of a "the," but I can't for the life of me recall where it is. |D It's not a big deal, though.
Everything charcter-wise is progressing at a reasonable pace, and I definitely envy your agents for their food. XD
Thank you for writing!
I've been playing WoW for a while now and the Jade Forest is hands-down my favorite zone in the entire game. Much love. <3
I'll go through later and see if I can spot the typo.
And haha, yeah, pandaren cooking is supposed to be the best. "Family. Friends. Food. These are what matter most." Doing my best with character progression but I'm still antsy about how I'm handling that. ^^;
Thanks again.
I've been playing WoW for a while now and the Jade Forest is hands-down my favorite zone in the entire game. Much love.
I'll go through later and see if I can spot the typo.
And haha, yeah, pandaren cooking is supposed to be the best. "Family. Friends. Food. These are what matter most." Doing my best with character progression but I'm still antsy about how I'm handling that. ^^;
Thanks again.
Not much to say, really, except that the bit about Rhonin's speech made me chuckle and that it made my bad mood just a bit less bad?
My guildmates keep joking they'll quit the game if Rhonan comes back for Legion. At least, I think they're joking...
Aviator and Zeb having some time for themselves, with moderate shenanigans, and mostly fun and good feelings? An as pure as possible moment of calm and heartwarming for both of them, but with enough sadness beneath to keep it realistic (Which could get a bit spoiled by the discovery of Supernatural and its tendance to chew all of its characters...)?
*pinches* It's really happening, woohoo!
I need a track to go with that.
Oh, and a small jab at Ellie's name. It will still be that one, right?
Expanding past for Zeb? Fry says this better than me.
Nuff said.
On a last note, what would be the Department Ave would be transferring for? On one handd, after the DMS, it could be vacations of another sort, on the minus side, it would mean less stories with her... Well, you're the boss, that will be your call.
Please keeps writing, Ix. Whatever the character, you rock.
The next story is going to involve them waking up and going "Awww".
...Nah.
Hey, Ave's settled on Andi, so... make of that what you will.
I wouldn't really call that expanding his past so much as it is adding in a little detail about his life before he died. He didn't think it was important enough to mention until now, which I think says a lot more about it than the revelation itself.
She'd be transferring to Intel if she decides to go that route.
Glad you enjoyed it. ^^;
That would mean being forced of watching all the horror of the fics, without getting the satisfaction of the kill. In some ways, that's the worst department, and people there are heroes for this.
Well, little trivia remains something. It's little details lke this which make the characterrs satnd out at the end of the day.
Euh, should I be worried that you went for that sort of emoticon for the end of your post?
You're darn right it's the worst Department— for exactly the reasons you described. What makes it worse is that there are virtually no reports of our activities— all the glory goes to the Action Departments, eh?
But at least someone here acknowledges our presence. It feels kinda nice. Thanks, I guess.
I especially liked how Rina is finally opening up to the thought of talking about her pregnancy. Yoy did a good job showing her development from "Don't talk about it" to "I could really get behind this".
I just fear that the Flowers might throw a Bleepfic, or even a Legendary, at them the second they return!
Yeah, she's starting to get used to the idea, but she's still a bit... guarded, when it comes to talking about feelings.and no, the Legendary won't be happening for another 20 missions or so :P