But while rereading "Pick your Poison" to get the context, I may have picked some glitches:

But the truth is, this is isn’t your story, or your world.
"is" shouldn’t be there?

You do not have a daughter—or a wife, for that matter—and have never met anyone else currently standing this room.
Missing word "in"?

And there may be another one in "Because we like you":

He impacted the wall and bounced off onto to the floor.
Either "to" or "onto" should not be there?

I liked Miss MacKinnon’s part best.

HG

It was cute getting to see Mollie and Ollie get settled into the Nursery. And Miss MacKinnon recounting her first reaction to seeing all those books was great. :)

I assume we can see a follow-up in 2025?

This was really cute and made me smile! I'm a sucker for stories where people fight and then both realize they overreacted or didn't quite get it, and this is a good one. (Though personally I would have reacted pretty much the same way as Doc about the books -- maybe I should reexamine my priorities.)

But yeah, I really liked it! A fantastic interlude!

I'll have to give it another read without the beta hat on. Cheers!

~Neshomeh

-Drat, it cut off. =p Hopefully my message remains obvious.

And I really like how Vania explained traversing HQ. These discussions are always a treat to read!

And YAY for the Pinkie Pie cameo~

Doc's reaction to the [SPOILERS] was priceless. X)