Subject: Is it important to the plot?
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Posted on: 2018-02-02 15:41:00 UTC

If it's something the reader needs to know to understand what happens next, definitely include it, and rework it to fit if necessary.

If it isn't strictly relevant to the plot, it's up to you (and possibly your eventual beta[s]) whether you feel it adds enough humor/characterization/whatever to be worth including or whether it just slows the story down.

BTW, since your previous mission-writing question is still fairly high up on the Board, you could've added this one to that thread. With the pace of the Board being so slow these days, it's not a huge deal, but still something to bear in mind.

~Neshomeh

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