Subject: I've read the bios. Pretty good.
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Posted on: 2017-12-19 22:42:00 UTC

Character bios regrettably have become my specialty throughout the time that has elapsed since I started caring about how to write well. Perhaps I should fix that, but I'm not sure where to start.

Anyway, your two agents seem to fit in with the PPC from what I can tell - lack of Sueishness and potential for comic relief are both strong here, and although I don't know much about Transformers, the second one seems plausible. Good job.

-Twistey

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