Subject: It doesn't seem to be like *that* Land Before Time fanfic.
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Posted on: 2017-11-29 13:51:00 UTC
From a cursory glance at it, it's the self-insert and somewhat clunky writing.
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Does this fic and its sequels suck? by
on 2017-11-26 18:41:00 UTC
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https://www.fanfiction.net/s/9479048/1/Land-Before-Time-Retold
Maybe it's just me but there's something about this series that rubs me the wrong way... -
It doesn't seem to be like *that* Land Before Time fanfic. by
on 2017-11-29 13:51:00 UTC
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From a cursory glance at it, it's the self-insert and somewhat clunky writing.
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Re: It doesn't seem to be like *that* Land Before Time fanfic. by
on 2017-11-29 16:42:00 UTC
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But is this series sucky enough to be mission material? I should note that the character learns to speak the language of carnivorous dinosaurs later. Along with skillfully wielding a bow and arrow, is that Mary-Sueish?
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Re: It doesn't seem to be like *that* Land Before Time fanfic. by
on 2017-11-30 12:05:00 UTC
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Somewhat, but in my opinion they're better targets to go after.