Short and sweet with no complications. Though I can't believe the author of the fic went and ripped off Moana.

It doesn't help that Moana is easily among my top 5 Disney animated movies...

Though it is a bit on the shorter side as far as your usual mission length. Nonetheless, the agent banter was good, as usual.

Nice, standard mission. Nothing complex happened, but you used the weather and Sue song as good sources of frustration for the agents, which makes it even funnier when they get the unexpected boon of the Sue tying herself up. Lainduilien is cute at the end, too. Oh, and I was amused by Elanor making the "prrrp" noise, too.

A typo (which HG probably already said but uh I didn't read other comments oh well):
She sighed an activated it.

—doctorlit is way behind on Disney stuff, still needs to watch Moana

Well, why should I be the one to go to all the trouble of saying nice things?
I’ve only ever seen this as "to go through all the trouble", but my awareness may be limited.

She sighed an activated it.
I’m sure this should be "and".

We’re gonna have to go the Nursery now, Elanor.
Shouldn’t this be "go to the Nursery"?

Others said it already: the friendly banter, the meta-joke about Lainduilien, the fortunate lack of mosquitoes in generic jungles – it’s all so good.

HG

• Ave and Dee are doing a wonderful job of the "friendly bickering" component of a relationship
  - Oh, Zeb. Are you going to be poking fun at those two for the whole mission?
  - Elanor is cute
  - ... I had to look up who Lainduilien was - that was a good meta joke
  - Heh. The Aviator's flying.
  - Yes, Zeb, please do play Bingo
  - Trying to clear water out of your head seems like a reasonable response to being italicized
  - Of course DoSAT has a betting pool on how many C-CADS Ave and Zeb will blow up
  - Ok, so this entire fic is basically going to rip off Disnay movies in an Avatar setting with some stupid extra sort of bender tossed in?
  - Good point about two-story houses
  - re: jungle "On second thought, Generic isn't so bad". snrk
  - That's a good description of picking food
  - Ave and Zeb drying off in the TARDIS (with the clothes and the butt-licking) is a cute scene. Also, where did the Aviator get that burn scar?
  - Zeb has a point about the hot guys
  - "thicker than Goyle"
  - I've learned something about wave heights today
  - The scene in which Zeb asks Ave if she'll be OK is touching
  - Nice of the Sue to make the assassination easier
  - Zeb putting on the earmuffs for Elanor. Heh.
  
  So, overall, this was short and had a lot of neat moments between the agents, and took decent advantage of the silliness of the fic to create some funny situations and lines.

I think Zebbie-boy once again took the spotlight of the fic. I can't help but to be absolutely enamored by his actions, starting from the obvious blockage in the beginning, through the grooming part :P

Also, oh my Elune people are ripping off Moana already!? Yeeesh. Good call with the Glopsnerch, too. Nice to see more obscure PPC tech making it a comeback.

Really, Ix, I am utterly in awe of how well you write. TEACH ME YOUR WAYS.