Subject: Do you want another?
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Posted on: 2017-08-30 05:27:00 UTC
I'll have a decent amount of time to look this over until this weekend, and then not much time at all until next late next week. If that could be a problem, feel free to turn me down.
- Tomash
Do you have a little free time? Feel like betaing an interlude about a Vulcan and a human on a DOGA mission? Try this interlude! Only nine pages long, minimal canon knowledge necessary (though knowing a bit about Vulcans would be useful), and--
*drops announcer voice* Yeah, I don't have a third thing. However, I do have this interlude!
I'm mainly looking for betas for wording/SPaG and story flow. There's a little bit of editing left to do (word choice, primarily), and other than that I'd really like another pair of eyes or two (or three! Three is also good).
As mentioned, the interlude will probably make more sense with a bit of knowledge about Vulcans (nothing too detailed, just the basics of who they are and some of the things they can do). It's primarily a character piece, so an eye toward consistent characterization would also be helpful.
Any takers?
~Z
I'll have a decent amount of time to look this over until this weekend, and then not much time at all until next late next week. If that could be a problem, feel free to turn me down.
- Tomash
I think that'll be fine: either it won't need much editing and the betaing won't take long, or it'll need some little piece rewritten and it'll take me half the week anyway since I've also got classes (I'm doing an intensive language dinner course. Er, that is, a summer course; thanks, autocorrect :D) I'll give you access to the doc very soon--just need to get out the door first!
(It's on GDocs, for context)
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