Do you have a little free time? Feel like betaing an interlude about a Vulcan and a human on a DOGA mission? Try this interlude! Only nine pages long, minimal canon knowledge necessary (though knowing a bit about Vulcans would be useful), and--

*drops announcer voice* Yeah, I don't have a third thing. However, I do have this interlude!

I'm mainly looking for betas for wording/SPaG and story flow. There's a little bit of editing left to do (word choice, primarily), and other than that I'd really like another pair of eyes or two (or three! Three is also good).

As mentioned, the interlude will probably make more sense with a bit of knowledge about Vulcans (nothing too detailed, just the basics of who they are and some of the things they can do). It's primarily a character piece, so an eye toward consistent characterization would also be helpful.

Any takers?

~Z