Subject: Very long post: Wait, I just remembered that I made a copy.
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Posted on: 2018-12-18 22:09:00 UTC
Okay, so their names are Evie, Crystal, and Sylvia (my favorite is Evie already), and apparently Evie and Sylvia are twins while Crystal is a year older.
Wait no Evie stands for Evyline. Just... what.
Oh they’re nine and eight. That... slightly improves their personalities for me?
Okay they have a name an lion named Nemo, a winged snake named Acid and a fire-breathing snake named Ashy.
They have wings,
They don’t have phoenix DNA, I lied. But they have fairy DNA, shapeshifter DNA, and 50% “fairy and faerie” DNA, because apparently those are different? Also the DNA... was... injected into them... which just... what Why.
Okay so in addition to having Cute Animal Friends they have sapient dragons named Pythia, Singer and Windwing and I’m pretty sure I intend Singer to be pronounce “Singe-er” because he’s a fire dragon.
Okay so they “bonded” with the dragons and their hair and eye colors changed? Like what.
Evie has heterochromia iridium with purple and black and I don’t think it’s even been one page.and her hair is black. With purple streaks.
Wow bad humor.
Okay so the dragons had a plan to escape but they waited until the Sues arrived to execute it.
I f***ing called them “Dragonspeakers”.
Okay so only tiny lapses in grammar thank god.
Okay so the “Evil Ones”’ general just went “Why must I do everything myself?” and tbh I kind of like him. Also, I just said tbh.
Freaking magic.
Wow they find an extinct species.
Okay I should probably stop.
Let’s rescue the “dimension dragon”. It (gender N/A) can make portals.
Hold on, apparently all humans are “Evil Ones” except for a select few.
Wow their dad just betrayed his whole species for them what is this witchcraftery
They’re suffocating the “leader”as leverage. These are 13-14 year olds. What the heck? I’m going to assume the leader’s the general. Again... can I recruit him?
The dragons... are Sues. The dragons are Sues.
I made the dragons Sues/Stus.
So this is a short story collection and only 7 stories are actually about these guys.
All the characters are either stupid or Sues/Stus.
... how did I fit this into barely more than 15000 words.