Subject: Job well-done!
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Posted on: 2012-10-28 00:59:00 UTC
Yet another fun read! I only spotted a couple of spelling mistakes - in fact, just an instance or two of a dropped 'd' at the end of a past-tense word - and the jokes were all very fun.
Good job!
The Missing Tales of Winnie Breccan
Target: Winifred 'Winnie' Grace Breccan and her Cute Animal Friend Shanahan
Fandom: BBC Sherlock
Agents: Eledhwen Elerossiel, Christianne Shieh, intern Cale Serfe
Things added to continuity:
-Mini-hound Myroft
-A new recruit, Jeeves (Anyone willing to write him? Just wondering)
-Finally cemented the link between the PPC and the Consulting Sue Slayer 'verse (slowly working on a tie-in fic to that blog, yeah). As of now that 'verse appears to be a metacognitive 'verse that knows it's part of a Word World. Mary Sues there are viruses that must be exterminated, yadda yadda. PPC Agents definitely welcome to visit and vacation there!
Nice job tying together the CSS tumblr and the PPC. I actually found a fic to send there, and I shall submit it as soon as I can be certain the Internet won't cut out at the worst possible moment.
Ugh. You know, 'Keep Calm and Carry On' posters were printed but never used because they'd been made to be used if the Germans took London. It does not refer to staying calm when you are angsty, Sue.
By the way, nice job with the red string. There are ways to write the 'destined soulmate' thing well (like in Luminosity) but this...
Yet another fun read! I only spotted a couple of spelling mistakes - in fact, just an instance or two of a dropped 'd' at the end of a past-tense word - and the jokes were all very fun.
Good job!
Care to point out the others?
Has Bleepolate milk already been thought of? Because Eledhwen chugging chocolate milk gave me idea sparks.
After all, I think that was meant to be a sly reference to Men In Black 3 where chocolate milk was linked to someone messing with time, so Bleepolate milk would be a fantastic answer to temporal-spatial distortions.
It appears there was only one - my memory duplicated itself. Does that now and then.
“I’m assuming the Elvish meant ‘take one step away from the RC and I will nuke your arse to hell’, or something,” the intern deadpanne. “What can possibly be so bad about this fic?”
This was so funny! Homicidal Eledhwen (is that spelled right?) is really interesting to see, and oh, the poetic justice! I like how Cale compares Eledhwen and Christianne to Sherlock and John. And the Johnlock! Ellie's right, John and Sherlock are soulmates by that definition.
One other thing--There's a point where Cale says "I set fire to the school, watch it burn as I kill the Sue" Mybe it's just me, but the phrasing reminds me of the Adele song "Set Fire to the Rain"--"I set fire to the rain/watched it pour as I touched your face". Probably just me, but if you intended it as a reference, I got it. I love your missions!
At the very end, we were thinking of random bits to add, and well, Adele came on the radio. So, Cale started to sing.
Sorry, Lily, that "Anonymous" guy was me, being witty before I covered all my bases... Like, you know, WRITING MY DAMNED NAME.
"Mary Sues there are a virus and must be exterminated."
EX-TER-MIN-ATE!
EX-TER-MIN-ATE!!
[/murderous Dalek xenophobia mode]