Subject: I'm sorry I took so long to read this.
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Posted on: 2018-08-30 23:38:00 UTC

First because it was rude of me.

Second because wow, that is so cool! I have no idea what is actually going on, because I'm pretty sure this guy has silicosis from all the dust and I am quite sure no science known to me can cure it just like that, but I'm also pretty sure that's the point. That ending! Between that and the almost casual reference to the Hiroshima bomb, I deduce that the Bone Man is an osteopath with superpowers. ^_^

I love his first paragraph of dialogue. "I will see you now" gave me a bit of a shiver. It's clever, and creepy.

And the descriptions are just beautiful. I think I'll need another reading to figure out what's what, but hey, that is no problem!

Thanks very much for sharing, and I apologize again for taking so long to respond.

~Neshomeh

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