Update... sort of.

I have returned- with beta request! by saintdane05 on 2012-10-08 21:58:00 UTC Reply

Hey y'all. Sorry for being away from the board for so long. Family and school stuff.

Anyway, I have been writing a Transformers fic, and am almost done with the first chapter. I was just wondering if anyone could look it over. The main focus is writing style and story., as I have been using tfwiki.net for research and Spell Check for... well, what you use spell check for.

General reading (fic still incomplete) here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_ywRvqfy5JcSyVzFH3rTcawAdbvOaHmBI9EPAwq8yhY/edit

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Update... sort of. by saintdane05 on 2012-10-14 14:47:00 UTC Reply

I added a few more paragraphs, if mah boi Sevenswans is going to look it over still. Pwease?
I know nothing of Transformers by Sevenswans on 2012-10-08 23:30:00 UTC Reply

Which makes me a decent editor for gross grammatical errors, since I'm not distracted. :) I've been through it quickly for grammar.

Good luck in school!

Thanks! by saintdane05 on 2012-10-09 01:06:00 UTC Reply

Thanks for being harsh! I actually prefer criticism like that. I responded to some of the parts that I could explain.

I do recommend getting into the series. The latest incarnation, Transformers Prime, is a good place to start. If you like lighter stuff, then there is Transformers Animated.

Transformers Prime pilot movie: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EMCSfcC0CEA

Transformers Animated (Ignore poor technical quality): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sMJEcmm0ao