Subject: I know nothing of Transformers
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Posted on: 2012-10-08 23:30:00 UTC
Which makes me a decent editor for gross grammatical errors, since I'm not distracted. :) I've been through it quickly for grammar.
Good luck in school!
Hey y'all. Sorry for being away from the board for so long. Family and school stuff.
Anyway, I have been writing a Transformers fic, and am almost done with the first chapter. I was just wondering if anyone could look it over. The main focus is writing style and story., as I have been using tfwiki.net for research and Spell Check for... well, what you use spell check for.
General reading (fic still incomplete) here: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1_ywRvqfy5JcSyVzFH3rTcawAdbvOaHmBI9EPAwq8yhY/edit
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I added a few more paragraphs, if mah boi Sevenswans is going to look it over still. Pwease?
Which makes me a decent editor for gross grammatical errors, since I'm not distracted. :) I've been through it quickly for grammar.
Good luck in school!
Thanks for being harsh! I actually prefer criticism like that. I responded to some of the parts that I could explain.
I do recommend getting into the series. The latest incarnation, Transformers Prime, is a good place to start. If you like lighter stuff, then there is Transformers Animated.
Transformers Prime pilot movie: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EMCSfcC0CEA
Transformers Animated (Ignore poor technical quality): http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9sMJEcmm0ao