;a; I did not expect that final twist.

OT: Another shameless plug??? by Scapegrace on 2019-09-03 12:15:00 UTC Reply

So hey, you guys know I've been doing a Masters degree in Creative Writing, right?

Here's my final project.

The Bone Man: Apprentice

All feedback greatly appreciated. I finished this last night. It is a mere 29 pages and 14,221 words. Give it a read. I can't see straight and my resting heart rate looks like a phone number. Enjoy.

And thank you for being there to support me during this. I really appreciate it. =]

That was amazing. by Neo New Skater on 2019-09-03 23:27:00 UTC Reply

The twist ending was excellent. The message was executed exquisitely. Your work belongs on the shelves of literature professors everywhere. In my book, you've already earned that Master's Degree.

Also, I found a spelling error:
"She was laser focussed, her mind trying fervently to parse the text in front of her, trying desperately to understand the wisdom of the ancients – and then suddenly something clicked.

Thank you! by Scapegrace on 2019-09-03 23:36:00 UTC Reply

It's really kind of you to say that!Anyone would think you liked it or something =]

As for focussed with the double s, it's a British spelling. And, er, I'm British. =]

Oh. by Neo New Skater on 2019-09-04 00:10:00 UTC Reply

Anyway, if your professor doesn't give you an A+, just say the word and his car ends up in the Nile River.

;a; I did not expect that final twist. by S.M.F. on 2019-09-03 17:46:00 UTC Reply

I had Many Emotions. This is a fantastic, fantastical piece, and it is very well-crafted.

Hell of a final project.

(Spotted one missing word near the end of it, though: "His levitation will fade quite naturally a few days." is missing an in.)

Dammit, there's always one that slips through the process! by Scapegrace on 2019-09-03 20:15:00 UTC Reply

Thanks for your kind words, I appreciate them very much. =]