Subject: Dammit, there's always one that slips through the process!
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Posted on: 2019-09-03 20:15:00 UTC
Thanks for your kind words, I appreciate them very much. =]
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OT: Another shameless plug??? by
on 2019-09-03 12:15:00 UTC
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So hey, you guys know I've been doing a Masters degree in Creative Writing, right?
Here's my final project.
The Bone Man: Apprentice
All feedback greatly appreciated. I finished this last night. It is a mere 29 pages and 14,221 words. Give it a read. I can't see straight and my resting heart rate looks like a phone number. Enjoy.
And thank you for being there to support me during this. I really appreciate it. =] -
That was amazing. by
on 2019-09-03 23:27:00 UTC
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The twist ending was excellent. The message was executed exquisitely. Your work belongs on the shelves of literature professors everywhere. In my book, you've already earned that Master's Degree.
Also, I found a spelling error:
"She was laser focussed, her mind trying fervently to parse the text in front of her, trying desperately to understand the wisdom of the ancients – and then suddenly something clicked. -
Thank you! by
on 2019-09-03 23:36:00 UTC
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It's really kind of you to say that!Anyone would think you liked it or something =]
As for focussed with the double s, it's a British spelling. And, er, I'm British. =] -
;a; I did not expect that final twist. by
on 2019-09-03 17:46:00 UTC
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I had Many Emotions. This is a fantastic, fantastical piece, and it is very well-crafted.
Hell of a final project.
(Spotted one missing word near the end of it, though: "His levitation will fade quite naturally a few days." is missing an in.) -
Dammit, there's always one that slips through the process! by
on 2019-09-03 20:15:00 UTC
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Thanks for your kind words, I appreciate them very much. =]