Subject: (Another) Reply to the Thing!
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Posted on: 2019-06-15 22:00:00 UTC

Thanks for the feedback!

Your point about there being, effectively, two stories in there has me wondering what it would be like to revisit the interlude at some point in the future and show all those moments that I think got lost in the rush of enthusiasm to make them an official agent pair and get them into missions.

Maybe there's a version with two parts, one that has an angel and a demon bumping into one another and hesitantly deciding that there isn't really much of a reason to smite one another now that the Apocalypse has been averted, and getting to know one another as they go and see the sights, before ending on them finding a portal. The second, introducing them to this strange new world and having each of them come to grips with the fact that their partner and once sworn enemy is really the only island of familiarity they have in this sea of weirdness.

I think that might be fun.

But, since we're here at this point in the story, I think we'll play up that dynamic of opposites that makes them so interesting to write (and hopefully fun to read).

And it looks like Ix has gone back to get the typo, so I've managed to avoid having to do anything helpful once again. Hooray!

—Aegis

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