Subject: Well, heck.
Posted on: 2019-12-31 13:34:38 UTC

Doc, you're entirely right about the neuralyzer. I did my best to explain why the agents got stranded in the fic, but that's a nice big plothole I left there. (Feel free to drive a bus through it.) The only explanation I can give for missing that detail is that I usually use neuralyzers during actual missions when the agents interact with canon characters - and since I wasn't writing a mission this time, I forgot to give them one.

I might take down this story and rewrite it, or I might leave it around for the character interactions, I'll need to figure out which. Either way, thanks for the feedback and for noticing what I didn't.

I'll go stand in the corner now.

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