Subject: o.O There's 'you broke canon'...
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Posted on: 2020-01-20 13:42:06 UTC
... and then there's 'you broke all the canons'. O.o
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hS
Subject: o.O There's 'you broke canon'...
Author:
Posted on: 2020-01-20 13:42:06 UTC
... and then there's 'you broke all the canons'. O.o
More comments to follow on the post itself.
hS
I don't recognize any of the characters, but I got a good sense of who they were and what they were about from the story, which is a big success in and of itself. I also liked the way you built tension throughout the chapter, what with all the unsolved mysteries and the characters not knowing what's going on, either, and everything being all messed up for everyone. I can't wait until they find their footing and see where this story's going.
But wait a minute. If this is a world with no authors, then who's writing this story...?
Also, minor nitpick in your post: It's called "World One," not "World 1," at least as far as I know.
... and then there's 'you broke all the canons'. O.o
More comments to follow on the post itself.
hS