Subject: Okay so...
Posted on: 2020-06-24 16:12:17 UTC
...I realized that my characterization is a bit lacking, so I'm not going to use my current draft for my Permission attempt. However, I would still like you two to take a look at it and see if you can identify some of the problems with my writing.
I'm saying this because I left the bios unfinished due to my lack of good characterization, so you will now understand that.
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