Okay so... by
on 2020-06-24 16:12:17 UTC
on 2020-06-22 07:50:40 UTC
...I realized that my characterization is a bit lacking, so I'm not going to use my current draft for my Permission attempt. However, I would still like you two to take a look at it and see if you can identify some of the problems with my writing.
I'm saying this because I left the bios unfinished due to my lack of good characterization, so you will now understand that.
Links are sent.
It's been a little while for me. by
on 2020-06-21 11:27:03 UTC
I'll be totally honest, it's been a while since I did a beta, but happy to help.
But I've Beta'd in the past and want to try and step up my writing game again.
You should be able to click my name to get my email address. Otherwise it's email@example.com.