Subject: Checking up on the fic
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Posted on: 2020-12-19 20:05:26 UTC

I looked at the fic's latest installment, and, uh...

I'll just list a few oddities from it so far:

  • Joe is apparently called Lain now in the fic, and is a trans woman now. All well and good for that part, but they give her a very Stu-like build (the impossibly big muscles) which kinda gives me weird vibes. They're pretty respectful about her identity otherwise, which is wonderful.

-- Izzy's also referred to exclusively by her English dub name, and is also a trans woman with a very Stu-like build. (Isn't she the Crest of Knowledge? She really doesn't need big muscles like that, just let her be trans)

  • The current villain of the story, I guess because of the Smash Bros reveal, is Sephiroth. So much so that he has the other villains of the story (Two OCs, Dargon and Automatica) scrambling because apparently this put a 'wrench in their plans'. Note that Automatica even namedrops the PPC, as Automatica has planned for the PPC if 'they were to come into our little canon'. (Character's words exactly)

-- Dargon is a space kangaroo, the son of a previous villain, and Automatica is consistently referred to as a 'fusion between Spottie Leonard from CRiTORA and Jareth the Goblin King'. Automatica also is referred to by they/them pronouns exclusively, which I congratulate the two authors on, actually. I just wish the character was written better and not described like... that.

  • There's more then one Valo, not just the Luke Ski one. There's a Valo modelled after Snapscube/Penny Parker, and one modelled after... Ken Penders? Penny!Valo is consistently called "Girl Valo". Also, the Ken Penders one doesn't talk, and is described as a 'maniac' consistently in the fic. To hammer the point of that home, they often call him "Feral Valo".

  • They slip in a Leeroy Jenkins joke... when Tai does a charge into battle, ultimately getting killed and... revived? Yeah, I don't know, either. He's now referred to as Animo, indicating a possible form change upon dying and reviving.

-- Same thing happens with Peyton from Chaotic, who they refer to as 'Antonia', indicating she's trans like Lain, too. Her name in the fic is currently Alitura. (The trans woman part's not a problem, I congratulate them on that too, but they really gotta kill her off and revive her a few paragraphs apart, huh?)

That's as much as I've gathered from the current installment of the story. The trans representation is great and wonderful, but a lot of the other elements? Not so much.

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