Subject: Don't forget...
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Posted on: 2012-09-17 13:44:00 UTC

That all the more interesting characters are secondary. This is one of the things that immediately raises my canon Sue/Stu warning flag: that I care more about the half-developed, or undeveloped, secondary characters than the protagonist, because their struggles are a foregone conclusion and not holding my interest.

For example, Murtaugh, Nasuada, Roran and Orrin were all more interesting in books one and two, before they became main characters. After that, it seems like they got flanderized and their characterizations are less consistent.

Also, the reading, in less than a week during his teen years... that doesn't fly with me. (Everything else at least got the "a wizard did it" treatment: maybe if Saphira learned to read (she's mentally very young at that point, should have a brain like a sponge,) and coached him through their bond. But I expect it to take a while longer than was shown.) It's a flaw that Paolini put in, either for historical accuracy of some sort or because he wanted an extra struggle, and which quickly gets handwaved and forgotten. It's not even plot-induced intelligence, it's Paolini discovering a trait that was going to be inconvenient and killing it off as soon as was possible.

Overall, though, I find Eragon to be drop dead mediocre as a teen/YA fantasy novel. (Of course, I found Twilight drop-dead mediocre-to subpar as a teen romance novel, but I have radically lower expectations for romance novels in general and ones with pretensions to supernatural plots in particular, and did before starting.) Yeah, he's a stu. He's not a particularly entertaining stu, but he doesn't (usually) make me want to hurl vitriol. He's kind of a boring stu.

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