The characters t-posing and the Sue rolling around in glitter while tantrumming were funny mental images!

Also, the Sue was indeed spoiled.

--Ozzielot

Haven't been reading many missions recently and this one was nice and short and entertaining!

I love all the ways you presented the Drusleys. The t-posing scene was the best by far, but all their wooden movements and deadpan word delivery was extremely amusing! And poor Madeline being inside the table . . . I like to think they were happy to blend back into canon just to get her out of there! The idea of a mansion in the middle of Privet Drive is hilarious, too. Imagine how envious Vernon and Petunia would have been! I also like the idea of the PPC-themed card deck, and wonder what all the faces are . . .

Glad to hear more of Null's backstory, and the unusual circumstances of his recruitment, too. Should be fun meeting his family and seeing how they adjust to the PPC setting!

A couple errors, both coincidentally involving Paye's name:

Paue ignored him and read the mission report on the console.

[Paye] bought lots of books with the money.
(I think that's supposed to be Emily's name in the brackets.)

—doctorlit thinks Emily at least had good taste in shopping priorities

...that fic sure doesn't show what it's telling (and that's from me skinning the badfic quotes)

David and Paye are a fun pair to read about and I'm looking forward to them maybe getting to know each other more on vacation.

As to the mission, the only criticism I can think of is that the quote and comment segment (before the cards came out) may have been a bit long, but that could also just be me.

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