Subject: Paye edited the Words because she wanted to get the books! (nm)
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Posted on: 2022-02-12 02:32:51 UTC
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Yet Another Mission by
on 2022-02-09 00:16:51 UTC
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Mission 2: The Spoiled Sue (warning for cursing and bl11)
I'm gonna wait to crosspost for a little bit, give people time to comment. I hope you all enjoy. It's shorter than the first.
The vacation interlude might not be the next thing I post, but only because I'm having difficulty writing it. The next mission is gonna be really cursed, though, so beware when that comes along (And it might be multi-parted, too).
Thanks again to Cicada for coming up with the paragraph for the Flowers because I cannot write them for the life of me lol.
-kA
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Good mission! by
on 2022-02-14 22:37:12 UTC
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The characters t-posing and the Sue rolling around in glitter while tantrumming were funny mental images!
Also, the Sue was indeed spoiled.
--Ozzielot
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Ooo nice by
on 2022-02-11 23:06:49 UTC
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Haven't been reading many missions recently and this one was nice and short and entertaining!
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re: mission by
on 2022-02-11 14:51:00 UTC
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I love all the ways you presented the Drusleys. The t-posing scene was the best by far, but all their wooden movements and deadpan word delivery was extremely amusing! And poor Madeline being inside the table . . . I like to think they were happy to blend back into canon just to get her out of there! The idea of a mansion in the middle of Privet Drive is hilarious, too. Imagine how envious Vernon and Petunia would have been! I also like the idea of the PPC-themed card deck, and wonder what all the faces are . . .
Glad to hear more of Null's backstory, and the unusual circumstances of his recruitment, too. Should be fun meeting his family and seeing how they adjust to the PPC setting!
A couple errors, both coincidentally involving Paye's name:
Paue ignored him and read the mission report on the console.
[Paye] bought lots of books with the money.
(I think that's supposed to be Emily's name in the brackets.)—doctorlit thinks Emily at least had good taste in shopping priorities
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Thank you! by
on 2022-02-11 20:46:15 UTC
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Again, I can't say that the interlude will be the next thing I publish, PPC-wise (I'm actually getting more done on the third mission than I am on the interlude) but I can say it will be published.
Eventually.
In other news, I crossposted it to AO3. Can't link it now (a bit busy) but I will try to link it later.
-kA, who didn't even realize that Paye's name replaced Emily's, although it makes sense for Paye to buy books.
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Paye edited the Words because she wanted to get the books! (nm) by
on 2022-02-12 02:32:51 UTC
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Thoughts by
on 2022-02-09 18:12:50 UTC
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...that fic sure doesn't show what it's telling (and that's from me skinning the badfic quotes)
David and Paye are a fun pair to read about and I'm looking forward to them maybe getting to know each other more on vacation.
As to the mission, the only criticism I can think of is that the quote and comment segment (before the cards came out) may have been a bit long, but that could also just be me.
- Tomash, on mobile