Subject: re: interlude
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Posted on: 2022-03-09 12:21:56 UTC
Cute little bit of narrative! You're really getting clever with the nested RCs idea. (Although don't infringe on Momoka's privacy too much, I feel bad for her!) And I think it will be lots of fun watching Inasuke and Urato trying to to do missions together.
—doctorlit, sleepy
In which there's some details on what kind of new life Urato and Inasuke are in for.
Typos at the front aside, it's a nice bit of writing. I can't think of much to say about it, especially since it's more a worldbuilding piece than anything else.
which is why I write it as "belong"
I see where you're coming from with this. The PPC is, technically, a group of many people/creatures, but I believe (and correct me if I'm wrong, anybody) the rule for most groups is to treat it as one thing.
For example, we wouldn't say "The Bad Pay organization are against...", we'd say "The Bad Pay organization is against..."
If PPC wasn't in acronym form, then I could see it going either "The Protectors of the Plot Continuum belong to Jay and Acacia." OR "The Protectors of the Plot Continuum belongs to Jay and Acacia." But, since it is an acronym, then it would be treated as singular, I think.
(And then there's the whole discussion of whether each memeber is acting individually or not. In the former, it is plural. But that's a whole 'nother discussion.)
-kA, who nearly wrote "The Agents Against Bad Pay" and wonders how long it would've stayed up, if that was the case.
The general rule is that American English treats organisations as singular, while British English treats them as plural.
In slightly more detail, the BBC says that it depends on whether you're talking about the group as a unit (singular), or as a number of individuals (plural). So:
But J&A themselves could have said 'are' in that last one, because they'd be talking about their own agents, not necessarily the organisation as a whole.
(But in American English, all of those would probably be 'is'.)
hS
Cute little bit of narrative! You're really getting clever with the nested RCs idea. (Although don't infringe on Momoka's privacy too much, I feel bad for her!) And I think it will be lots of fun watching Inasuke and Urato trying to to do missions together.
—doctorlit, sleepy
One more interlude to finish their introduction, then they'll get their missions!
Thanks for the comment!