Subject: re: interlude
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Posted on: 2022-03-15 13:00:08 UTC

Considering how short this story is, you did an amazing job of showing how different each of the children's personalities are, both in terms of age/relative maturity level, and in what's likely to interest or upset them! I do feel bad for Constance here, though. I get the feeling she wanted to live in a more familiar, earth-style environment, but the rest of her family was so used to more fantastical places . . . But I'm glad they found the French Quarter as a kind of a compromise! the house is much too Yellow for my tastes, but the courtyard and pool are nice!

Just one typo: a missing apostrophe on
"Daphne tugged her mothers hand."

—doctorlit, soon to brush the teeth

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