Aw, poor Momoka. While it's nice that Kaguya isn't putting himself in danger any more, I can understand how Momoka can feel like she has a less active role now. (Though I suspect most agents would be grateful for such "normal" missions!) I wish she would see herself more as Kaguya's friend than his maid.

I liked the detail of the phrase from classical Japanese mysticism being used during the exorcism, very appropriate and clever. And I'm excited to see whatever shenanigans HQ has in store for Kaguya! (Though I suspect I know where he's about to end up.)

A couple errors:
"What ever shall Momoka do when her master no longer wandered in fits of 'angry mode'?"
Since this sentence starts in . . . uh . . . future . . . future, some kind of future tense, future imperfect? in future something tense, "wandered" should switch to "wanders." Which is . . . present tense. I don't know why it works that way in English, it just does!

"'. . . you choose disguises, write down charges and carry equipments . . .'"
"Equipment" is already a plural word, so it doesn't need an "s" on the end.

—doctorlit, keeping up with publishing as best he can