Subject: re: interlude
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Posted on: 2022-04-06 03:08:23 UTC

This is actually a very sweet story! Not only because of the interaction between Momoka and Kaguya, but because it expresses the agents' (and your) connection to the canon. I've seen the phrase "canon love" used once in a while in older stories to describe supporting the word worlds, but it's not often shown this clearly in the text. Very nice!

Though I will say, sometimes it's good when writers have a definitive endpoint in mind, so they don't feel obligated to stretch characters and plot out to places that don't make sense for the sake of making the story continue. A longer story isn't necessarily a better one . . . glances at his Heroes DVDs

—doctorlit is glad you still have some content to look forward to, all the same

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