Subject: This was a fun read.
Posted on: 2022-05-05 18:50:49 UTC

Also, there are some things I would like to point out. I'm not mad.

"Alas, how his and his mini Booky held their breaths at the battle against the mouse king!"

I assume you mean "Alas, how he and his mini, Booky, held their breaths?"

It was amazing how fast Urato grew from ambivalent towards to totally loathing a piece of music; if he heard that annoying celesta melody to Sugar Plum Fairy just one more time, there was a high chance something would end up horribly broken.

This is a very long sentence, and I think it reads more like two sentences stuck together.

The CAD reading on Stephanie made me laugh. I'm wondering the same thing. I will post more when I have time.

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