Subject: Liked, but unsure of a couple things.
Posted on: 2022-05-06 17:07:33 UTC

I thought the mission was pretty good—seriously, that was an odd Sue. And in a new (to the PPC) canon, too!

I didn’t understand the Japanese, but I don’t speak Japanese. No surprise there.

I think I saw an error:

“The other agents didn't have it any easier, as they didn't have much room to move yet under threat of a Sue feet's falling on their heads:”

The “a Sue’s feet” is difficult to parse, it’d be better phrased as “one of the Sue’s feet”.

Can I have Drosselmeier, please?

(Side note: what would a misspelled Mini be?)

Anyway, good job!

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