Re: Grief, Gizmos and Gollum + 20 by
doctorlit
on 2022-06-12 14:40:07 UTC
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Gosh, the J+A cameo is nice, but the agents really could have resolved things for Mary a lot more straightforwardly! For starters, a CAD reading would have revealed Mary to be non-glittery, which would have removed the assassination option entirely. I don't see why they couldn't have portalled her back in time to when she left home, either, unless we were treating World One as unportalable back in this time period. I guess the opportunity to recruit, and earn more vacation time, was too tempting for J+A, but I would have just gotten Mary home, if it were me. You can probably guess what ending I'm rooting for, too!
As for predicting the film version of this scene . . . All I'll say is, bumrushing a villain feels a lot more natural for a human than it does for a Hobbit!
—doctorlit, shaving in Neshomeh's bathroom!?
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PPC+20: "Mary Sue, Sue Mary and the Broken Plot Continuum" 4 by
[Nath]
on 2022-06-08 15:59:39 UTC
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Nath's masterpiece continues, and Mary Sue and Sue Mary are out of Rivendell and causing trouble to the south...
Mary Sue, Sue Mary and the Broken Plot Continuum: This wasn't in the film? by Nath.
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Interesting... by
Kittyauthor
on 2022-06-08 13:55:04 UTC
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I haven't read the other chapters (apologies) but I never figured that the months of posting the fic actually would pass! If I knew that... nothing would happen, because I haven't sporked any dimensional hoppers. I'll keep that in mind, though.
This reminds me of a later PPC (?) fic, where a "Sue" was part of a Mary Sue class in the factory (O think?) and the final test was "go into Middle Earth and mess it up" and this "Sue" was hunted down by oblivious PPC agents, despite the Sue not wanting to be a Sue? I think? It's been a hot minute since I've read it.
But, anyways, I like the feel of this chapter. Now I need to go back amd read the others.
-kA
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It tellls the story from the Sue's perspective. Interesting. by
TheBefuddledBookworm
on 2022-06-08 03:34:01 UTC
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This made me laugh. Now I want to read some more of GreyLadyBast's stuff.
Random thoughts. by
Linstar
on 2022-06-06 14:11:05 UTC
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Well, I liked it. No surprise there. It’s funny, and I like that Jay and Acacia try to recruit her. I like that Jay and Acacia appear at all.
Um, I thought that the swearing wasn’t as bad as it claims. That’s what I get for reading My Immortal.
Side note: when does the PPC +20 event end?
—Ls