Subject: Eh...
Posted on: 2022-07-18 11:42:02 UTC

I don’t know that it’s too bad. Without knowing the canon either, the biggest things I noticed in the first chapter were the ridiculous “generic illness” and the occasional typo (including the annoying misspelling of allons-y).

Honestly? It seemed a bit more mediocre than outright bad. Maybe it gets worse, but...enh.


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