Subject: Beta Request Gaiden: Thunder Shock
Posted on: 2022-07-18 19:14:55 UTC
This is a reiteration of my previous beta request in case people have stopped being busy since then. The mission is 12000 words long, but I wrote an updated version of the 2000-word intro and I feel I could use feedback on both versions as a compare/contrast thing. Continuum is The Simpsons, and if someone could get back to me that'd be great.