Subject: I liked it.
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Posted on: 2022-08-10 17:11:02 UTC
There's not much more to say, honestly.
By the way, when you have multiple paragraphs of dialogue, you add quotes to the beginning of the paragraphs.
( " What do you mean, plagiarism?
"I like cupcakes! Somewhat," he interrupted himself. )
--Ls
Featuring Guya in his childhood.
I like Kaguya's mother supporting her son's experimentation with makeup, despite it being outside the gender norm. But I very, very much love his father teaching him never to look down on others over meaningless social hierarchy. More kids need to learn that growing up . . .
—doctorlit just got "Baby Shark" stuck in his head, and now, so can you!
… the sharks chomp a swimmer body part by body part and she dies and goes to heaven. With a cutesy dance to match.
Give it up for the Fairy Godfathers!
Once again, you've proven a talent for throwing together characters with wildly clashing personalities. I'm looking forward to seeing them interact, especially when Helena's free-thinking spirit crashes against Sheen's weird rule-mongering. I'm interested to see how Fáelán copes with the situation, too.
A pure curiosity question: With Fáelán being a fairy, and talented at magic, is Diasomnia the Maleficent-themed dorm in Twisted Wonderland? The theming isn't always obvious from what gets mentioned in your missions.
—doctorlit is gargling salt water, but it's very normal, perfectly ordinary thing to do, don't question it, don't comment on it, it's normal, we all do it, you're probably doing it right now, aren't you?
And its dorm head is based on Maleficent (his name is Malleus) no doubt. The -somnia bit is also clearly from Latin somnus meaning sleep.
I liked the personalities you have. Should be interesting to see them work together.
—Ls
There's not much more to say, honestly.
By the way, when you have multiple paragraphs of dialogue, you add quotes to the beginning of the paragraphs.
( " What do you mean, plagiarism?
"I like cupcakes! Somewhat," he interrupted himself. )
--Ls