Subject: I read it.
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Posted on: 2022-08-12 20:55:45 UTC
I liked the personalities you have. Should be interesting to see them work together.
—Ls
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Freshly baked two slices of interlude/backstory by
on 2022-08-10 16:52:15 UTC
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Featuring Guya in his childhood.
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re: backstory by
on 2022-08-16 01:53:36 UTC
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I like Kaguya's mother supporting her son's experimentation with makeup, despite it being outside the gender norm. But I very, very much love his father teaching him never to look down on others over meaningless social hierarchy. More kids need to learn that growing up . . .
—doctorlit just got "Baby Shark" stuck in his head, and now, so can you!
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[Probably bl3] Oh dear, in elementary, I was taught a variant where… by
on 2022-08-16 04:17:20 UTC
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… the sharks chomp a swimmer body part by body part and she dies and goes to heaven. With a cutesy dance to match.
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Graphic shark, don’t don’t don’t don’t! (nm) by
on 2022-08-16 17:28:54 UTC
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Remember those three fairy recruits? They get their own spin-off now by
on 2022-08-12 17:33:37 UTC
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Give it up for the Fairy Godfathers!
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re: intro by
on 2022-08-16 02:24:47 UTC
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Once again, you've proven a talent for throwing together characters with wildly clashing personalities. I'm looking forward to seeing them interact, especially when Helena's free-thinking spirit crashes against Sheen's weird rule-mongering. I'm interested to see how Fáelán copes with the situation, too.
A pure curiosity question: With Fáelán being a fairy, and talented at magic, is Diasomnia the Maleficent-themed dorm in Twisted Wonderland? The theming isn't always obvious from what gets mentioned in your missions.
—doctorlit is gargling salt water, but it's very normal, perfectly ordinary thing to do, don't question it, don't comment on it, it's normal, we all do it, you're probably doing it right now, aren't you?
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I’m not gargling salt water... (nm) by
on 2022-08-16 14:09:09 UTC
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Yes, ding ding! Have a glass of green soda! by
on 2022-08-16 04:11:28 UTC
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And its dorm head is based on Maleficent (his name is Malleus) no doubt. The -somnia bit is also clearly from Latin somnus meaning sleep.
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As long as it isn’t parsley soda... (nm) by
on 2022-08-16 17:27:57 UTC
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I read it. by
on 2022-08-12 20:55:45 UTC
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I liked the personalities you have. Should be interesting to see them work together.
—Ls
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I liked it. by
on 2022-08-10 17:11:02 UTC
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There's not much more to say, honestly.
By the way, when you have multiple paragraphs of dialogue, you add quotes to the beginning of the paragraphs.
( " What do you mean, plagiarism?
"I like cupcakes! Somewhat," he interrupted himself. )
--Ls