Subject: Read, pretty good.
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Posted on: 2022-08-15 21:09:47 UTC

It was pretty short...and...I guess it could have used some more description.

I think you should say that the Tolkien Legendarium (shouldn’t it be capitalized?) belongs to the Estate, rather than the family. Right? I don’t really know, I’m not one of the resident Tolkien geeks.

Okay, that's some Sue. (I think honey-golden blonde is a reasonable-ish hair description.) That shade of blue, though...

The end was rather abrupt, I think it could’ve used some fleshing out.

—Ls

P.S. Can I adopt Mirkwodd the mini-Balrog?

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