Subject: Review and typos.
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Posted on: 2022-09-21 18:31:14 UTC

Erm, in your post, I think you mean "its much better glory".

I liked the mission. Thalia and Doom's personalities really shine.

"The PPC is the property of the amazing Jay and Acacia; Redwall belongs to Brian Jacques mayherestinpeace; and the badfic and the agents."

What about the badfic and agents? I think you left something out of the disclaimer.

“Ok!”

Perhaps I'm just being nitpicky here, but that should be either "okay" or "OK".

--Ls

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