Subject: re: mission part 1
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Posted on: 2022-10-06 14:07:32 UTC

me: Oh, our first Ratatouille mission. That's different; can't wait to see some Ratatouille stuff.
the first fic paragraph: references a shipwreck, a goddess, and The Little Mermaid
me: I guess it's been a while since I watched Ratatouille . . .

With the agents being rats, you took advantage of a great opportunity having a scene shift drop into someone's purse! Nice idea! I'm not sure the agents in rat disguise would be able to speak to the human characters in this universe, though. I'm pretty sure the rats and humans never speak the same language in the film?

The one line:
The woman, while still couldn't understand anything transpiring, seemingly calmed down . . .
would parse more smoothly as:
While the woman still couldn't understand anything transpiring, she seemingly calmed down . . .

—as a Kingdom Hearts fan, doctorlit is contractually obligated to refer to Remy as "Little Chef"

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