Subject: Yes! This was fun to see in full.
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Posted on: 2022-11-03 12:24:13 UTC
Love the chaos caused by Mellon. LSY was as Done as ever, hahah.
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Interlude: Ditching Wings is finished and posted! by
on 2022-10-31 10:52:35 UTC
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With everyone having left feedback on their agent(s)'s presence in the story, it's ready for publishing. I tried to find tags for as many of them as I could, but I don't think everyone has a tag on Ao3. Thank you again to all who signed up!
Interlude: Ditching Wings
In which Mellon finds himself a new body, causes havoc at HQ in the process, and A Witch Did It.Words cannot express how fun it was to hang out in Discworld. A little scary, but fun. Hope I did it justice. (Footnotes are fiddly.)
Enjoy!
/Ekwy
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re: interlude by
on 2022-11-09 12:31:57 UTC
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Hey, sorry it took me so long to get to reading this. It's been quite some busy weeks for me!
I really, really enjoyed this! It's a very PPC story, through and through. You made incredible use of so many elements of Headquarters: not just the physical elements like the Escher room and all the cameos, but the Marquis's drive for recruits, the discussion with Freedenberg over all the options the PPC has at its disposal, and my favorite of all, bending the usual protocols to have Intel seek out a goodfic, and turning it into a low-key mission to both give Mellon the opportunity he needed, and provide Gadrik and Fellrazer the mental enrichment they've been lacking. It's such a great little package you've tied together! (And speaking of Gadrik, he feels like a very realistic toddler here, too; you did a great job of describing a two-year-old's mannerisms!) I also loved all the detail you went into describing Mellon's thought process as a crow. Crows are tricky, being non-sapient animals that nonetheless have very complex mental faculties, and I think you did a great job of getting across a level of abstract thought without just resorting to using words. The conversation with the Marquis, with the emojis standing in for speech, was especially funny and expressive!
Some other, minor details I enjoyed: I like the idea that the lighting in HQ comes out of plotholes. I've always just figured HQ had visibility simply because the narrative laws required it for our characters to serve their roles, but the plothole detail really helps reinforce the patchwork nature of the "building." Also, I enjoyed Granny Weatherwax's little diatribe about choice vs. decision. Good stuff!
—doctorlit is proud to have one of his characters present in such a wonderful story!
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What a lovely review, thank you. =3 by
on 2022-11-13 21:24:45 UTC
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I was afraid I had bitten off more than I could chew with a lot of different threads, and I wasn't sure how it was all going to fit together... I am so glad everyone is happy with their agents' cameos! It was my biggest fear.
Crows are really neat. =) Mellon would be about the same level of intelligence as Gadrik; it's a shame they didn't get to interract more come to think of it. (It is very likely though that Gall insisted on a quick trip to Ankh-Morpork after they picked him up to extend family vacation a little longer, so they might have bonded.)
Thank you for taking the time to write such a glowing review! It really made my day. <3
/Ekwy
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Yes! This was fun to see in full. by
on 2022-11-03 12:24:13 UTC
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Love the chaos caused by Mellon. LSY was as Done as ever, hahah.
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Glad you liked it! by
on 2022-11-06 13:07:10 UTC
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And I'm glad I got the cameos right... I was testing that ability in myself for a larger scale project a little further down the line. Best not to say too much about it right now. XD
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Sorry for intruding, by
on 2022-11-07 23:00:18 UTC
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but you can also use any of my seven agents as well 😉. However, if you do decide to use them, please credit me as KnShirayuki rather than Kі nо Shirayuki.
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Thank you, but... by
on 2022-11-08 12:02:17 UTC
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...I just want to stop further sign-ups in this thread. XD I appreciate the enthusiasm, but this isn't the right place for it. I'll make a proper thread when the time comes where any requests about crediting and such will be in one place! Makes it way easier for me.
The project isn't one that I'll even start until next year at the absolute earliest. There will be plenty of time to sign up for it. But thank you!
/Ekwy
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Well, whatever that project is, you are free to use Mina (and Carlisle) however you may wish. by
on 2022-11-07 12:34:41 UTC
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And, uh, side note: I sent you an email with a link to that co-write, not sure if you’ve gotten it yet.
—Ls, kinda butting in
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Ok, this was brilliant, and I very much approve (nm) by
on 2022-11-03 01:11:05 UTC
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That's lovely to hear, thank you. =) (nm) by
on 2022-11-06 13:04:15 UTC
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(Re)Read, and Kudos’d! by
on 2022-11-02 11:43:50 UTC
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It was very good! I really liked seeing Mellon as human, and even though I’m not super familiar with Discworld, I liked seeing that too.
I think you accidentally added a few extra spaces in places.
—Ls
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Thank you! by
on 2022-11-02 12:26:14 UTC
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Yeah, the extra spaces is something Ao3 does sometimes... I think it's something in HTML that causes it, so it has to be fixed manually. I'll get to it eventually, but it happens all the time. >.<
Thanks for re-reading!
/Ekwy
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That was really good! by
on 2022-10-31 15:08:23 UTC
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I particularly enjoyed the science section, and the solution to Mellon's problem was inspired. :D
hS
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Ha! Thanks. =) by
on 2022-10-31 15:40:23 UTC
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Not gonna lie, writing Granny was intimidating. And I went through a lot of different ideas for how to turn Mellon human before I settled on good old fashioned magic.
Glad you liked! Thanks for reading. =)