Subject: The Hat is not on (yet)
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Posted on: 2022-11-24 19:59:18 UTC

I'll admit I haven't looked into things in too much detail yet but I do have some worries. Your writing sample doesn't look like it's going to tell me anything, it's a parody of a fanfiction of a continua that's not even where either of your agents come from. To be honest, that doesn't inspire hope in me. But I could be wrong.

I'm also worried as last time you mentioned getting Permission one of the main concerns raised was how well you would understand the PPC setting, and OK, you have now said that you've read TOS, and that's great. But I can't see anywhere anything that confirms that you understand the PPC setting beyond that.

Finally, personally, I'd prefer more flesh on your Agents Bios, from a quick glance you don't seem to be missing anything, but I wouldn't mind seeing a bit more.

Like I said, my PG Hat is firmly off at the moment, I haven't had the time for a good long look at anything just yet, so I don't want to make a judgement one way or another (and I'm happy to leave it open if another PG wants to swoop in here).

Nova

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