Subject: re: interlude
Posted on: 2023-02-10 14:08:14 UTC

Poor Rebecca! Leave from work is supposed to be less stressful than work! I hate roller coasters, but I’m glad Rebecca got at least some enjoyment out of this one, somehow. Good of her to put herself through it in the name of watching her cousin.

Um, in the sentence:
Standing in line waiting, and then getting in and waiting some more while everyone else boarded and the coaster finally got itself going was torture.
I think there should be a comma after “going,” since the phrase starting with “and then” is sort of separated from the main action of the sentence.

—doctorlit does tolerate Big Thunder Mountain, though, because animals

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