Subject: The repetition is intentional đ
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Posted on: 2023-11-11 04:02:47 UTC
and thanks for reading đ
Subject: The repetition is intentional đ
Author:
Posted on: 2023-11-11 04:02:47 UTC
and thanks for reading đ
As the group seeks help from the tengu scientist who gave Kaguya the mysterious pill, revelations are made.
Heh. I like how this story arc is shaping up, itâs pretty entertaining!
As the Cotton Roses Bloom part 2
I love how youâve characterized Oshimo; she feels so alien, the way she recognizes that she created a problem, but doesnât seem to feel any remorse or sympathy over it, just expects the agents to get out and deal with it on their own. She even comes off as a little spooky! I like it. The pillâs effect playing with the Japanese double meaning on âcolorâ is hilarious, as well!
Of Seaside Castles and Red Breams part 1
You definitely found a fic with some stellar typos, there! I especially love âKing Trident.â It made me picture the trident itself just sitting on Tritonâs throne, with his crown hanging off one of the tines. But much funnier than the fic is your ingredient list! I was expecting things like plants and minerals and animal hair, so when Urato finally read out all that abstract stuff, I was grinning. The agents certainly are in for a struggle, arenât they? Iâm racking my brains on how to âsolveâ some of them . . . Letâs see, one of the jack-oâ-lanterns from the Halloween Tree could qualify as a âseed of time,â since they only âbloomâ around Halloween, and the story thatâs named for it involves time travel. For âa fragment of the night,â the Kingdom Hearts games have a set of synthesis items named âwrithingâ and âtwilightâ that contain âdarknessâ and âtwilightâ respectively; they could be said to be physical fragments of night! And then, âcloth of fleetingnessâ could be all kinds of equipment from different fantasy settings or mythologies . . . or just Cross Trekkers. And Iâve got nothing for âperfume of daylight.â I guess just open a jar while the sun is up, then close the jar?
Oh, and you taught me a new word, bream! Which is a little embarrassing, but hey, I donât work on the aquarium side!
âdoctorlit wonders if it would be funny or traumatic for Akira to be sorted into Octavinelle dorm
Given their distinct biological quality, how would one work as a Flower in HQ?
. . . the Flower version's mood could change over time? HQ doesn't have days in the traditional sense, of course, so just . . . over time? >.>
âdoctorlit travels twenty-four hours forward in time, each and every day.
Spoilers: she doesn't go to NRC. Which is a new one, I guess.
In which the search for antidote ingredients begins, and strange vocabulary choices lead to a race track appearing out of nowhere.
I look for ward to the next part.
However, one quibble: "The only sound the environment made was an annoying, squeaky first-person narration; the only moving creature was King Trident the trident-wielding, chewing-gum-wielding baby moray eel."
Seems a bit redundant to use wielding twice there.
--Ls should write a mission
and thanks for reading đ