Subject: re: backstory
Posted on: 2024-05-29 12:15:23 UTC

A cute little story! I like that Mitsuki was willing to shift her potential career to something new to support her family, but didn’t have to give up her interests, either. And indeed, let boys be beautiful, too!

A couple grammar notes:
Hazama Mitsuki was an unmatched beauty, a fact she was very aware.
“very aware of.”

Our baby has received blessing from the moon,
Either “received a blessing from” or “received blessings from”

—doctorlit received a blessing from an ant yesterday, and it's still itching this morning

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